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June 27, 2012
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Spider's Web by ~Kimmiecat555

The grey smoke was steadily streaming out of his mouth. He stretched the wires between his palms... feeling each microfilament, as they slowly extended out of his fingertips. Ahhh... what a feeling. What could possibly feel better? Oh, yes, he knew what would feel better: Instantly, he snapped the threads apart and reached down to his right hand to unbutton the white sleeve enwrapping his wrist. He rolled up the sleeve, slowly, elegantly, carefully folding each time, until it neatly rested above his elbow. Now being free of the cotton chains, he once again spread his palms apart.

With a soft wave of his wrists, he sent a thousand strands floating up through the air to seek out and entwine with the flesh of his opponent. Oh, yes, he caught it! Quite a massive body... It's not enough to catch the hands, one should bind the whole entire trunk. So he extended the fibers and locked them in his teeth, as to not to loosen up the molecular leash. More strands flied through the air, landing on the opponent's neck- more- the legs- more- the chest- more- the face- more- the wrists- more- the fingers- more- the nails- MORE-- until every single cell of the body was caught up in the wires. 

The opponent struggled to free himself, his body trembling with rage. He's strong... pretty strong... a real monster! Walter nodded. If he were a mere human, this would have been quite boring...... The filaments painfully slid along his teeth, as they got pulled by a loathsome amount force on the other side. He clenched his teeth yet even more firmly and closed his burning fists to hold down his prey. The pale skin stretched over his knuckles, whitening them out, as the filaments kept sliding down. Blood broke out on his fingers. For a moment, his pale eyes shot down to look at the crimson streamlets. A rush of ecstasy lifted his insides up, while the smiling lips spread over the sharp filaments: "Ah-ha." Thus the insane laughter was taken and delivered, in one brief, elegant breath. A movement of the head, a quick glint passing over the eye. Suddenly, he pulled. In the snap of a finger, the thousand microfilaments shot up through the air to come back to their master. He felt it through his fingertips- how every strand cut through the rough bone, ripped apart the soft flesh, and shattered the delicate organs; blood rained down on the asphalt. 

The Angel of Death exhaled the grey smoke and threw down the finished cigarette- into one of the small pools of blood. Good that he had rolled up his sleeves... a bloodstain on the white shirt would be... troublesome to clean.   
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02:27 in the morning. The first draft is complete. I'll edit it tomorrow.
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17:00 Edited it. :) OK so, this is A Vignette for Walter. My fingers didn't turn to put it down as fan fiction because "I put in too much of myself Henry" (OK, I bet no one got what on earth I'm talking about here.) Shortly, I felt the vignette side of this piece very heavily. I should say that I spent a monstrous amount of time on this- why? because it was fun to write! :D

Oh well, you know that one moment in the Dawn where they show Walter standing and looking out of the window... That uncaring posture... i think that's what got me caught in. How old is he in this vignette? You decide, because the image kept changing in my mind, as I wrote it. You know, one moment a teenage boy, another moment a grown man... No actually somewhere in between... Have no idea! ^^'

I'm going to put a mature tag on it, (agreed on it with ~Flying-Leopard :) )
I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it! Please leave some comments! :)
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Edit: :iconkimmiecat555: kindly gave me her permission to use her beautiful deviation as an illustration for this piece. If you enjoyed the picture, go and check out her page! :)
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Disclaimer: Walter C. Dornez (c) Kouta Hirano - !!!DOES NOT BELONG TO ME!!!
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~kasukabe12 Jul 29, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
awesome
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~Wakagi-chan Jul 31, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks. :) Anything you liked in particular?
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~kasukabe12 Aug 2, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
That the fact that it was Walter

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my name is buttons fear me
:trollface: u mad
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~Wakagi-chan Aug 3, 2012  Student Writer
:D
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!athanase-roux Jun 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
ah, I thought so... Walter from Hellsing... *sigh* perfectly executed, ma chere. :)

Just the way you described every sensation he went through as the strands of molecular wires exited his fingertips... wow.
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Mood: Joy ~Wakagi-chan Jun 29, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you for the kind words, chérie.

Yes, I could almost feel every sensation myself, as I was writing. :) Glad to know that I managed to convey it to you, too.
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!athanase-roux Jun 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
of course.
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